Overall, we really liked your application. You went into great detail about Renko's relationship with Maribel, which we feel gives her depth as a character. You say that she didn't have friends until university and that she exhibited odd behavior such as overexplaining during conversations or randomly changing topics, so we're just curious if you can provide more concrete examples of her behavior when she interacts with specific people, or at least someone who isn't Maribel. This way, we'll be able to judge your samples better.
You have one week from today (May 1, 2016 @ 11:59PM EST) to submit the additional information. We hope to hear from you soon!
As a side note, if you submit another application in the future, please follow the instructions when posting your application. It's okay to link back to your journal, but we request that your first post contain your OOC information with the second reply linking to your application. Thank you!
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Overall, we really liked your application. You went into great detail about Renko's relationship with Maribel, which we feel gives her depth as a character. You say that she didn't have friends until university and that she exhibited odd behavior such as overexplaining during conversations or randomly changing topics, so we're just curious if you can provide more concrete examples of her behavior when she interacts with specific people, or at least someone who isn't Maribel. This way, we'll be able to judge your samples better.
You have one week from today (May 1, 2016 @ 11:59PM EST) to submit the additional information. We hope to hear from you soon!
As a side note, if you submit another application in the future, please follow the instructions when posting your application. It's okay to link back to your journal, but we request that your first post contain your OOC information with the second reply linking to your application. Thank you!